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Post by EXODUS Office on Dec 16, 2012 13:06:40 GMT -6
Let's have at it, guys.
Match of the Night:
Surprise of the Night:
Spot of the Night:
Overall Rating:
Misc.:
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Post by Dante Q on Dec 16, 2012 14:26:43 GMT -6
Match of the Night: Probably the Main Event.
Surprise of the Night: Nothing really grabbed me the balls in shock.
Spot of the Night: Still thinking about it.
Overall: Good Job!
Misc: Consistent formatting. Establish some formatting rules and we stick to them. Makes for an overall 'neater' appearance.
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Post by #MrEXODUS on Dec 16, 2012 17:46:47 GMT -6
Match of the Night: The Main Event from a flow standpoint. Just based on my marking out, it would be my match. I marked hard.
Surprise of the Night: No surprises really.
Spot of the Night: Nothing really stuck out to me this week.
Overall Rating: 8/10 - It was a good first show. Hopefully we'll get more segments in and create storylines as we progress.
Misc: I agree with Alex on the consistent formatting. I think it would be beyond beneficial to come up with a structured format we can abide to when writing the matches. That keeps the flow and the realism in tact.
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Post by Andrew Ashton on Dec 16, 2012 17:52:46 GMT -6
Match of the Night: I'm picking this from a completely selfish stand-point, but I thought the way Clint wrote out my character in my match was perfect. I really enjoyed it. My character aside, I think the main event was great.
Surprise of the Night: I think it's impossible to pick a surprise of the night. It was the first show so everybody is still getting familiar with each persons character. While everyone is still quite foreign, nothing is really a surprise. I guess in that case it'd have to be the main event being turned into a International Title match.
Spot of the Night: Octo-butt in the face!
Overall Rating: In terms of the actual writing, the show was very well written. I think like surprise of the night, this is hard to give an overall rating to. It's the first show, booking people against each other would have been difficult without having prior knowledge of how good they are. On the whole though, I believe it was a good first show and we can take off even more from that now we have a better understanding of where people stand.
Misc.: A lot of the same characters were used/mentioned in segments, but again, I understand why because with it not being a weekly show, people want to be able to progress their storylines without having to wait an age. I'd like to stress that this isn't a critisicm at all towards the people putting in a couple of segments, I just think so it isn't like it's just the same characters over and over, we could probably do with a couple of other people getting involved segment-wise. I know that might be a bit rich coming from me, having not done a segment this week, but things are in the pipeline!
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Post by Deleted on Dec 16, 2012 17:58:33 GMT -6
Match of the Night: My match.
Surprise of the Night: Her titty ain't pop.
Spot of the Night: Silver Squid losing.
Overall Rating: C+.
Misc: Let's keep it like the UN and make things more diverse.
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Post by Deleted on Dec 16, 2012 18:05:36 GMT -6
You want diverse, you GOT diverse! THE BLACK GUYS HEADLINE THE SHOW. I mean, uh...I'll take that under advisement, Mr. Octopus. EDIT: Oh! Also, if you guys have a different way you'd like to see this feedback deal go, by all means let us know.
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Post by Andrew Ashton on Dec 16, 2012 18:06:33 GMT -6
While the Mehicans clean up after the show. The hell is that all about!?
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Post by Deleted on Dec 16, 2012 18:09:40 GMT -6
Oh, I just told them that there was a main event of them against brooms. They took it a little too seriously.
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Post by Andrew Ashton on Dec 16, 2012 18:10:39 GMT -6
I blame Octopus. Anything for some limelight.
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Post by Daisuke Iwakuma on Dec 16, 2012 18:15:37 GMT -6
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Post by Deleted on Dec 16, 2012 18:28:15 GMT -6
no no, squid. get them in one pile.
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Post by Deleted on Dec 16, 2012 18:42:16 GMT -6
Match of the Night: Johnathan Brooks vs Jayden Powers - I think this match will get overshadowed by the main event as far as the attention it receives, but I believe it would have been a great match to see in person. Surprise of the Night: Daisuke Iwakuma and Ito laying down for Kliff Ulysses to get the win and move on to the next round.
Spot of the Night: Omar Wise tossing Fiona three rows into the crowd after catching her in mid moonsault. I also enjoyed the "Know" video sequence. That song was awesome!
Overall Rating: 8.314/10
Misc.: To repeat the sentiments of Orange Octopus and Seth Ericson: "You mean the Omar Wise show?" Lots of Omar Wise. Would have loved to see other people step up and put in more segments to make for some diversity. Rachel Cole's avenging mission to fix vending machines is definitively awesome! You also have to wonder if someone is going to fess up to attacking Angel Kash, as well as Rufus Frost's reaction to people laying down in a match to secure a victory for other. Potential beginning of a power struggle? Not sure where The EXODUS Pro International Title fits in, but it will be interesting to how the storyline regarding that title unfolds. I really enjoyed the show overall. My guilty admission is that in the past I haven't read whole shows in other feds, but I was interested to see how the results unveiled potential storylines, feuds, future epic battles, and other potential awesomeness. Thanks to everyone who put this together!
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Post by Kevin on Dec 16, 2012 21:27:25 GMT -6
To be fair, I only intended to write one segment and be in my match. Due to lack of segments, I was asked last-minute to write something else. I intended for that seg to probably happen next show.
ANYWAY.
Match of the Night: While I really enjoyed writing JB/Powers/Cannon(And I hope everybody liked what they got to do in there!), and I was pretty happy with how Omar was treated in the main event, I was a big fan of both the matches with the Molluscans. They're fun characters. Also, I quite liked the match with Leisureforce, although I wish it had been more in-depth.
Surprise of the Night: That I got put over like Black Jesus.
Spot of the Night: Mmm, the Octobutt was good, most of Omar's spots in the ME were good... Let's say Omar lawn darting Fiona.
Overall Rating: B. The show could have done with some more editing and proofreading, and having a static style guide to follow would be important, but it was an enjoyable show.
Misc.: Justin Brooks/Omar Wise. Let's burn this mother to the ground.
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Post by Deleted on Dec 16, 2012 21:45:36 GMT -6
I'm surprised you got put over like Black Jesus, too.
Mostly because I thought Justin Brooks was Black Jesus.
Or Jesus. Who was probably at least dark-skinned.
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Post by A Confirmed Real Person on Dec 19, 2012 20:59:22 GMT -6
Match of the Night: Definitely the main event -> not biased at all, i promise!
Surprise of the Night: KLIFF FUCKING ULYSSEUS!!! fangirls all over the place.
Spot of the Night: Omar Wise throwing Fiona halfway across the arena without breaking a sweat LMAO.
Overall Rating: 8/10. Very good for the first show, I think but it can only get better from here now that we're getting the hang of things and used to how people work/operate.
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