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Post by Adrien Cochrane on Jun 11, 2013 21:31:06 GMT -6
So yeah. Feedback, please?
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Post by The Karma Keeper on Jun 15, 2013 1:04:51 GMT -6
Not a lot of people do this for some reason, and in my opinion, more people should. But, being a friend of yours, I figured it'd be the right thing to do. I read your RP. I liked it, I genuinely did. I'm a sucker for fantasies like this, as you can see by my last two RPs if you bothered reading them, so this was fun to me. Granted, this was the first RP I read of yours and frankly, one of the first I read in EXODUS as a whole, and I really liked it. I think the promo dragged a bit if I'm being honest, and the middle wasn't as great as the beginning, but all around, I don't know if I'm aloud to do this, but if I were a judge, I'd say you have a really good chance at winning this.
There's only one thing I have a problem with, something that makes me shake my head...
If Zero is running an anti-pot rally, where, in your mind, is Lifer in this backwards mirror land? I'm just wondering for the laughs is all.
No, but seriously, this made me want to read your RP next week too. And not a lot of RPs do that for me. I get bored easily, if I'm being honest, but this I liked. lol.
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Post by Adrien Cochrane on Jun 15, 2013 1:10:17 GMT -6
I am not as familiar with the Lifer character as I was the other people I referenced in the Alternate Reality section. As for the promo, I can see how it did trail off a bit in the middle. I'll definitely make sure the next one has as much umph in the middle as the bookends do. Thanks for the feedback, sir.
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