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Post by Deleted on Nov 19, 2013 19:56:45 GMT -6
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Post by Deleted on Nov 30, 2013 15:07:50 GMT -6
First week (two RPs) in the book. Enjoy.
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Post by Deleted on Dec 17, 2013 15:41:14 GMT -6
I'd love any feedback, including scores if the judges are so inclined.
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Post by White Satan on Dec 17, 2013 15:48:39 GMT -6
Hey bro.
Anna Molly - AM-003: Giants 5/12/7/8/8: 40 Colin started building a story for her, and I like it. The CD portion was exceptional, showing that she just wants to be brutal and violent, and I think it worked for her at this point. This was a good job by him, and I think that as the story starts to build, I like his chances of getting Anna into the International Title division and maybe more.
Kaboom, my scorecard.
I gave you a 7 because it was your first CD piece. It was good, but it left me wanting more. I want to know what's in her head even more than I did previously, what motivates her to not be a monster and not a wrestler. She's almost seemingly the perfect compliment to Gods & Monsters (Hint Hint?), but I like what you've done. I said that a story piece would put you right up there with some of the biggest and best here, and we proved that with this one. Good job, dude.
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