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Post by The Notorious J2K on Dec 6, 2013 0:29:32 GMT -6
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Post by White Satan on Dec 6, 2013 0:59:10 GMT -6
I've told Colin personally, but I'll say here that as staff, I won't publicly give it out for obvious reasons. I can talk after the judging period.
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Post by The Notorious J2K on Dec 6, 2013 1:02:35 GMT -6
I've told Colin personally, but I'll say here that as staff, I won't publicly give it out for obvious reasons. I can talk after the judging period. No problem. I completely understand that approach, both as staff and as a reviewer.
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Post by Christmas Furby on Dec 7, 2013 0:04:04 GMT -6
I'm intrigued, and anxious to see how you develop the character, and if his belief system will stand the test of time in EXODUS.
The promo, it was enjoyable, but I did want a little more, but I assume as you progress here and get your feet wet, we'll see some interesting things from Vengado. It could be a very good character here.
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Vengado
Dec 17, 2013 14:22:23 GMT -6
Post by The Notorious J2K on Dec 17, 2013 14:22:23 GMT -6
Since the judging period for EXODUS #8 is past, I was looking for more feedback, so I know where to improve this week.
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Vengado
Dec 17, 2013 14:31:26 GMT -6
Post by White Satan on Dec 17, 2013 14:31:26 GMT -6
I'll c&p my scorecard for you, Jay.
Vengado - Entry 001 | reforged | A Declaration of Intent 5/11/7/7/8: 38 I think this low score has a lot to do with it being a newer character. I probably could have given the story an 8, but I felt this was appropriate. Vengado certainly has an x-factor which makes the character intriguing. I want to know more about him, I want to know how he ticks. This is one of the more intriguing newcomers we've picked up lately.
Basically, 7 is my typical standard score for newcomers in their CD and their Storyline development. You have a cool concept, I'm interested in watching it grow, and you did a decent promo. You have room for growth, which is a good thing, Jay.
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Vengado
Dec 17, 2013 14:40:55 GMT -6
Post by The Notorious J2K on Dec 17, 2013 14:40:55 GMT -6
I appreciate the feedback, and always assumed I'd get a lower score due to the character's new-ness.
It may take me a bit of time to find my feet with this version of Vengado. When I used him in eWo, I had a clear endgame in mind with him eventually unmasking. As this version doesn't have that same endgame in mind, there'll be some stumbling blocks as I find the right footing.
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