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Post by Anwaar Saad on Jun 18, 2015 12:24:23 GMT -6
Could anybody give me a review of my latest RP The Difference?I'm still a bit rusty and no where near as good as you lot haha
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Post by White Satan on Jun 18, 2015 22:23:00 GMT -6
It's short, but there's room to grow. You have a great opportunity to explore and create the character down in RW, so use it. Yes, it's an angle fed, but a lot of the handlers here work both places for fun.
Don't be afraid to go beyond the promo. Show us everything. You'll get there in no time.
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Post by Anwaar Saad on Jun 20, 2015 3:29:51 GMT -6
Thanks man, I always had a problem with fully fleshing out my character in previous feds, so this is a great chance to do so with Saad. Also, I completely didn't realise how short it was xD I usually aim for around 2000 words.
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Post by jramsey on Jun 20, 2015 10:32:18 GMT -6
Thanks man, I always had a problem with fully fleshing out my character in previous feds, so this is a great chance to do so with Saad. Also, I completely didn't realise how short it was xD I usually aim for around 2000 words. Don't worry about length; I won the International and SDB Titles and went to the semi-finals of last year's Honor Cup writing between 1500-2000 words/RP. Content is king, not length.
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Post by White Satan on Jun 20, 2015 13:33:25 GMT -6
Thanks man, I always had a problem with fully fleshing out my character in previous feds, so this is a great chance to do so with Saad. Also, I completely didn't realise how short it was xD I usually aim for around 2000 words. I'm going to encourage you to flesh him out. Feel free to hit me up anytime you want and I'll be happy to give you feedback and advice. We don't RP the RW wrestlers as much as the main roster does, but we still make it work. I run Carey Caldwell down there, so I'm happy to help you and work with you. Also, do you edit videos?!
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Post by GO FUCK YOURSELF NICK on Jun 20, 2015 18:56:30 GMT -6
Hey man!
I'm Allison, and while I've been roleplaying for the last fifteen years, this is my first attempt at efedding. But I've had my main roster character, Ruby Tyler, around for five months now, and I'm doing pretty well with her. I've also got Vivienne Robichaud (Mistress Vivi) and Angelina Fantastica down in Revo, so I'm sure you'll see the two of them around.
Anyway, I liked the roleplay that you put up for Anwaar, and I look forward to reading more from him. The best advice I got in terms of writing when I got here was to find a hook and go with it. What kind of story are you looking to tell with this character? What are some of the events that helped shape him into who he is today? How did he find his way to EXODUS/Revo? Think of it like episodes of a TV show. Each roleplay is one episode in the larger arc of your character's story. As for the promo bits, I actually went back through the archives to find roleplays for the character(s) I was facing to take a look at their promos - how the character carries themself, what their attitude is, what kind of reputation they have within the company. I took a look at their opponent(s) too, basically looking for the same thing - how they talk about the character in question.
Another thing is to read the roleplays for the shows (and the stuff that gets posted in developmental). There's a variety of styles, word lengths, and subject matters, so you can see how everyone has worked to flesh out their characters. And we have an amazingly talented group of writers here, all of whom are incredibly creative and friendly and who blow me away with the stuff they come up with. So it's a really great environment, and we're always here to bounce ideas around and come up with something fantastic.
So keep writing, and keep trying out new things! There's no word min/max here, so you've really got the freedom to experiment with different stuff.
Also, that video edit you did for the Revo show was freaking amazing. How did you do that?
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Post by Anwaar Saad on Jun 21, 2015 4:38:11 GMT -6
Ah, the video! I stole the clips off youtube, cut and changed it so it had little reference of anything like UFC or stuff that wouldn't apply to Saad and then the dialogue from a movie. I did it all in Sony Vegas, but it was mainly me stealing from other people haha. Thanks for the compliments. Also, thanks again for the feedback. I had a big falling out in the previous fed I was in, so I decided to change over to here because it looked like a great community I'll try and get a second RP up while applying the feedback you have given!
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