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Post by Nicholas Gray on Jul 28, 2015 20:07:20 GMT -6
Come on.
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Post by LAZERADE! on Jul 29, 2015 9:08:57 GMT -6
Proper feedback when I get home. In the meantime?
FUCK YEAH!
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Post by Simon Raines on Jul 30, 2015 13:53:04 GMT -6
Feedback over the weekend when I have the proper time to read this monster.
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Post by LAZERADE! on Jul 30, 2015 15:15:25 GMT -6
ATTEMPT 2:MATCH 1: Won't comment too much, coz I wrote it. However, come on, I did great.
BLACK JONES! Being Black Jones! Ain't had enough of that recently, and I can't wait to see him start to get the push he deserves.
CHUCK LIFE! DUN DUN DUNNN, HEREIN LIES FOREBODING! A nice little segment, exploring the developing relationship between these two. I liked it.
MATCH 2: JB did great work here. Solid showing from all three competitors, nobody looked "weak", a match that on any other card would have been further up the card.
MATCH 3: It's no secret, I'm a fan of Styg's work, which is why I bugged him to write this one. I feel everyone looked solid, and all the little nuances everybody wanted are out there. I hope Mike and Matt are as happy with it as I am, and Styg is proud.
CHUCK LIFE 2! AKA Zack Lifer's Sudden But Inevitable Betrayal! Whatever this leads to, should be good!
CAREY & DANIEL! A really nice piece between two people who were friends and aren't any more and that's OK. Me likey.
MATCH 4: Nice little match, and gives Vivi a nice send off. The postmatch also helped build Carey as the douchiest face you know, which is a thing.
THAT FUCKING COMPUTER THING: AKA OH MY GOD BRENDAN IS BACK TWITTER IS GOING TO BE SO MUCH MORE BUSIER ARRRRRGGGGGGGHHHHHHH
MATCH 5: A really good feud ender here, in which SHOZO has no chill, that does wonders for the development of SHOZO. Also with the post-match airing of Papa's dirty laundry, a really good little piece.
mara & SAXOPHONES! MYSTERIOUS!
MATCH 6: AKA FIGHTPORNFEST 2015! This was a good, different match. Very well written, especially from someone who is less confident in their match writing. This feud has better not be over.
ANDERSON & JOLYNE! SMASHY SMASHY! THAT'S HOW YOU SAY HELLO!
MATCH 7: Nice intro from Jiminy-Billy-Bob, and this match was amazing. A good, hard fought battle a perfect feud ender, and one that leaves both parties free to pursue other things. Really really solid stuff.
CTHULHU! MYSTERIOUS 2!
GENJI! Someone's bringing the fight to REVOLUTION! VETERANS vs YOUNG UPSTARTS! WOO!
MATCH 8: This match was an amazing pay off. Allen did great here, and I feel that both characters really advanced from their last match. This was possibly sleeper for MOTN.
FUROR! Being Furor! See earlier comment RE: Black Jones!
MATCH 9: IT'SFINALLYHERESALTALVSMAGNUMGUNRORIT'SAMAZINGOHMYGOD! Plus, fucking standing ovation for Gabe, as someone relatively new to the fed, to stand up and handle those characters so well, well fucking done.
MATCH 10: AN AMAZING PAY OFF! There could not have been a better culmination to this feud, and and finer send off for Kane. Again, well done Al.
IMPERIUM! ITFINALLYHAPPENEDTHISHASBEENPLANNEDFORLIKEWHATFEELSLIKEAMILLIONYEARANDIT'SEVERYTHINGI'DHOPEITWOULDBEWELLDONENICKIHOPEEVERYONEELSEISSUITABLYHYPED!
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