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Post by EXODUS Office on Feb 10, 2013 22:23:07 GMT -6
Match of the Night: Moment of the Night: Face of the Night: Heel of the Night: Other Thoughts:
Overall Rating:
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Post by Dante Q on Feb 10, 2013 22:47:12 GMT -6
I'm going to come in here and leave some detailed feedback later.
But top effort to everyone involved.
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Daisuke Iwakuma
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Post by Daisuke Iwakuma on Feb 11, 2013 8:47:03 GMT -6
Wanted to bump this so people see it again.
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Post by Deleted on Feb 11, 2013 10:33:44 GMT -6
Call me an iconoclast but I don't much like rigid feedback forms. All of the matches seemed solid, though some had endings that surprised me very much. I for sure thought Summer had her match won, but its all a matter of taste.
None of the segments stood out immensely however they were all nicely done, and served a purpose. Nothing seemed like "filler" or that it would have been fine without it, etc.
Other Thoughts: Personally I wanted to say thank you to the writer of Katherine / Rizzo for understanding the character quirks and dynamic. The playing possum was done perfectly to character.
The posting of the show was choppy. You have a lot of smaller posts and it takes the board a long time to load this all the way - at least it did for me on Google Chrome. A suggestion would be to post it in as few sections as possible, the max post for one of these boards is pretty decent.
The over all show was quality work, that other is just an aesthetic observation.
This show was a lot of fun to RP for and build up to on Twitter too.
Overall Rating: Brownie Batter Donut. You don't think that's good or don't get it, hie thee to a Dunkin' Donuts and experience the bliss.
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Post by Dante Q on Feb 11, 2013 13:18:34 GMT -6
Match of the Night: I would say the Main Event Moment of the Night: This was the heel's night - but it should give a good grounding and platform going forward. Face of the Night: Fiona Rourke / Abby Park Heel of the Night: Donovan Torment Other Thoughts: None at this time
Overall Rating: Good+ Show.
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Kevin
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Post by Kevin on Feb 11, 2013 15:41:29 GMT -6
Match of the Night: While I was really happy with how I wrote Rizzo/Reynolds, I can't help but be selfcentered and say how much I enjoyed the finals. Fiona got some really good spots in there, and in a one-on-one rematch where both of us are totally focused on one another, it's going to be another close-as-hell match. I don't envy the judges.
Moment of the Night: I really liked Frost asserting himself as the alpha dog in the show opener. That was a cool touch. Also, I enjoyed seeing Squid superkick Octopus, although I wish that had gone a little longer. Putting Squid over at Octopus's expense could have been extremely dramatic.
Face of the Night: Fiona, with Abby Park and Alex Brooks as close seconds. Heel of the Night: Kliff, and I'm excited to see what he and LEGION have to say this next show. Other Thoughts: Erh... This is going to sound like me being a prick, but as a fed, we need to work on consistency of writing. There is nothing more jarring than reading through something with fully typed out prose and description to the actions, and then see two people trading *grins at her man* *grins at his girl* back and forth. That type of thing happened a couple of different times throughout the show.
Overall Rating: A good first big event, and I'm eager to see what we can muster up for the next iPPV. And I'm officially starting the bandwagon for iPPV 2 to be titled: Paper View.
8.4 out of 10.
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